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introducti​on
hook: what loztia show me
thesis:wha​t i think about what she show me
Body
summary: tell what she show me
response:w​hat i have to say about that
Advice: tell the reader what to do
Concusion
restate thesis: talk about the thesis again
put it all together: sum up everything i was talking about

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1.intoduce
   A hook
   B thesis
2.Body
   A summary
   B response
   C Advice
3 conclusion
   A Re-state thesis
   B put it all together

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         back in high school, most girls were drama! including my own girlfriend. i honestly did ot have any problems because i always tried my best to study and woek the things with my teachers in high school. i never failed a class and never had a D. so my problems was how to deal with my girlfriend.because i felt like im spending way to much time on her and when i tried to my own stuff and school work she thought i was doing something else or hanging out with other girls.problems were hard and sometimes there is no solution to fix it. i decided to only focus on school and finally my girlfriend cheated and kind of dumed me and i was hurt but by the time i was back on track and started to focus on my stuff again and it worked up.i spent everyday talking to my teachers about my homework problems and all that stuff. and i asked questions and never gave up. i think the story of Linda lotzi was great and we have some facts in common. she was afraid to lose her job and her future. she was very nervous and sometimes she was careless. she was a returning student and that made the problem even more difficult but at the end she did not want to gave up and even her son was pushing her and lotzi was afraid of most things. it was a very hard situation for her to handle those stuff. she was a mother, a worker and also about to go back to school to learn more and study for her future. she wanted a good future for herself and her loved ones. lotzi never gave up and always tried to find a way to solve the problem. it hink i did the same thing as well. after my hurt was broken i still wanted one thing or shall i say one word that was success.we did what we could do the best, which is education. we both went to school and worked hard and by failing it means you start and do better. it is life and thats just the way it is. never give in.linda lotzi was such a hard worker and a student who thought Education was the only way to success.its hard when someone is a single parent and at the same time work and go to school. i think linda was in a really hard situation and most people cannot handle that. so these days single parents who go to school apply for financial aid or ask government for help. she sometimes felt down.maybe it was to hard for her to handle that. its alll about working hard and never give up on what you are doing. some people like lotzi were smart in math and that can be a good talent.her son was pushing her up to finsh also. graduating is always challenging, even for lotzi.but the problem is she could no longer afford it. but nothing comes easy.  finally lotzi decided to attend college and she only took one course which was math and she was good at it. she also worked hard and tried her best to be a good student and she always asked questions to her teachers. she was to find ways to work and study at the same time. she was scared of losing her job.

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          back in high school, most girls were drama! including my own girlfriend. i honestly did ot have any problems because i always tried my best to study and woek the things with my teachers in high school. i never failed a class and never had a D. so my problems was how to deal with my girlfriend.because i felt like im spending way to much time on her and when i tried to my own stuff and school work she thought i was doing something else or hanging out with other girls.problems were hard and sometimes there is no solution to fix it.
          i decided to only focus on school and finally my girlfriend cheated and kind of dumed me and i was hurt but by the time i was back on track and started to focus on my stuff again and it worked up.i spent everyday talking to my teachers about my homework problems and all that stuff. and i asked questions and never gave up.
          i think the story of Linda lotzi was great and we have some facts in common. she was afraid to lose her job and her future. she was very nervous and sometimes she was careless. she was a returning student and that made the problem even more difficult but at the end she did not want to gave up and even her son was pushing her and lotzi was afraid of most things. it was a very hard situation for her to handle those stuff. she was a mother, a worker and also about to go back to school to learn more and study for her future. she wanted a good future for herself and her loved ones.
          lotzi never gave up and always tried to find a way to solve the problem. it hink i did the same thing as well. after my hurt was broken i still wanted one thing or shall i say one word that was success.we did what we could do the best, which is education. we both went to school and worked hard and by failing it means you start and do better. it is life and thats just the way it is. never give in.

If at first you don't succeed

1.            linda lotzi was such a hard worker and a student who thought Education was the only way to success.its hard when someone is a single parent and at the same time work and go to school. i think linda was in a really hard situation and most people cannot handle that. so these days single parents who go to school apply for financial aid or ask government for help.
2.           she sometimes felt down.maybe it was to hard for her to handle that. its alll about working hard and never give up on what you are doing. some people like lotzi were smart in math and that can be a good talent.her son was pushing her up to finsh also. graduating is always challenging, even for lotzi.but the problem is she could no longer afford it. but nothing comes easy.
3.           finally lotzi decided to attend college and she only took one course which was math and she was good at it. she also worked hard and tried her best to be a good student and she always asked questions to her teachers.
4. she was to find ways to work and study at the same time. she was scared of losing her job.

My first blog ever!

hello im francis and im pretty new on blogger.com! i hope i can send some educational stuff here! ok now im out! peace!